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KU Coffee Read

You finished. Now find out if it works.

You wrote the whole thing. Now you need someone to read it—not to be kind, but to be useful.
I go through your manuscript as a reader first, editor second. I note what's landing, what's losing me, and where the story is doing something different from what I think you intended.

Then I tell you why—with enough specificity that your next revision has actual direction, not just vibes.

What You Get:

Detailed Editorial Report: A comprehensive breakdown of my overall impressions of your novel. I’ll pinpoint the exact mechanics that aren't working and explain why so you can fix them.
Personal Impressions: Honest, raw reader reactions. I'll let you know exactly when I cheered, gasped, or got bored.
Deep-Dive Inline Commentary: Page-by-page, chapter-by-chapter margin notes using the review tools on Google Docs or MS Word, showing you my real-time reactions as the story unfolds.

Praise where it's earned. Honesty where it's needed.

You have the story. Let’s find out what’s missing.

You've already gotten the feedback, but it hasn't helped. "Something's off." "I don't connect with this character"—but you still don't know what to do about it. You've written so many drafts that the words have stopped meaning anything.

I read your entire manuscript—plot, characters, emotional arcs, internal and external conflicts, resolution, all of it.

I look past the surface to identify the true intention behind your words, deeply understand your characters, and reverse-engineer your narrative engine.

What You Get:

The Blueprint Audit: A comprehensive deep-dive analysis of your story's structural and emotional pillars.
Bespoke Revision Roadmap: A highly customized, step-by-step action plan that details exactly what is already working on the page and the concrete steps you need to take to fix the rest.

The story you want to tell is already in there. I help you find it.

Published on Kindle Unlimited — but not sure it's working?

You put the book out there. The reviews are trickling in—some good, some vague, some that make you wonder if readers are finishing it at all. But you're not ready to commit to a full manuscript audit just yet. Fair enough.

The KU Coffee Read is a low-stakes, surface-level diagnostic sample designed for authors who already have a published novel sitting on Amazon. Think of it as a taste test of my full Narrative Strategy service.

To keep things entirely secure and professional, no emailed manuscripts are required—just a direct link to your live book.

What You Get:

Honest First Impressions: I'll read your published work directly on Kindle Unlimited and share exactly what's grabbing me and what's losing me.

Surface-Level Structural Diagnostic: A quick look at whether there are overarching structural patterns or pacing issues worth paying attention to. No rigid templates, no generic rubrics. Just an expert reader letting you know how your book lands.

You can buy me a coffee afterwards. ☕

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Services

Beta Reading

Narrative Strategy

& Character Development

KU Coffee Read

What You Get:

Detailed Editorial Report: A comprehensive breakdown of my overall impressions of your novel. I’ll pinpoint the exact mechanics that aren't working and explain why so you can fix them.

Personal Impressions: Honest, raw reader reactions. I'll let you know exactly when I cheered, gasped, or got bored.

Deep-Dive Inline Commentary: Page-by-page, chapter-by-chapter margin notes using the review tools on Google Docs or MS Word, showing you my real-time reactions as the story unfolds.

Praise where it's earned. Honesty where it's needed.​

You have the story. Let’s find out what’s missing.

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You've already gotten the feedback, but it hasn't helped. "Something's off." "I don't connect with this character"—but you still don't know what to do about it. You've written so many drafts that the words have stopped meaning anything.

I read your entire manuscript—plot, characters, emotional arcs, internal and external conflicts, resolution, all of it. I look past the surface to identify the true intention behind your words, deeply understand your characters, and reverse-engineer your narrative engine.

What You Get:

The Blueprint Audit: A comprehensive deep-dive analysis of your story's structural and emotional pillars.

Bespoke Revision Roadmap: A highly customized, step-by-step action plan that details exactly what is already working on the page and the concrete steps you need to take to fix the rest.

The story you want to tell is already in there. I help you find it.

Published on Kindle Unlimited — but not sure it's working?

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Praise where it's earned. Honesty where it's needed.

I read your entire manuscript—plot, characters, emotional arcs, internal and external conflicts, resolution, all of it.

I look past the surface to identify the true intention behind your words, deeply understand your characters, and reverse-engineer your narrative engine.